Tue
Jan 10 2012 10:30am

Concluding a Series with a Cliffhanger: Unanswered Questions in Richelle Mead’s Dark Swan Series

Shadow Heir by Richelle MeadOne hopes author Richelle Mead is not sensitive to negative reader reaction. If she is, this is not the week she wants to be on the internet.

Richelle Mead is an Urban Fantasy and YA writer with several series under her belt. Her latest release is the fourth and final book in her Dark Swan series, Shadow Heir.

And many fans are not happy with this book.

If you are a reader of the series but haven’t gotten here yet, I shall try to be as vague and spoiler-free as possible, but be warned...

There might be SPOILERS.

The problem many have with this book is that the end leaves some lingering questions. It does not read as though it is the last book of the series. One her blog, Richelle Mead offers insight into why she wrote the ending this way (as well as confirming that—at this time—there are no more books planned for this series.) She states that she enjoys not having every end tied up and leaving a little mystery at the end.

With all respect to the author…no. No, no, no. Is that clear enough?

This is The Sopranos going to black on those last frames. This is X-Files where at the end of the series we were just as confused as at the beginning. Giving an ending that is not an ending is a cheat.

The ending of a series is just as important—perhaps more so!—than the beginning. After we’ve journeyed with these characters and immersed ourselves in their mystery and their psyches, we have a lot invested with them. The payoff we receive with the ending is very important for us as we look back on these stories.

I really feel for writers in that position, those who’ve created a well-loved series where everyone is wondering how it is going to end. It can’t be comfortable to know that no matter what ending you create there will be a certain percentage who hates it, and that fans will be debating if the ending was a “good” ending or not for a long time.

Still, I would prefer an ending I hate versus not getting a true ending at all. I am counting on you, the writer, to finish the story for me. I have not stuck with you for years and years just to come to the end and have you tell me, “And what happens after this, I’ll have you decide.”

If that is what you give me, I can’t trust you. I can’t take another journey with you, because I’ll always be wondering if you’ll abandon me at a crossroad again.

I want every question answered. I don’t want any lingering mysteries. Maybe I won’t like the answer I receive but—darn it!—I don’t want to be forever wondering “What do you think happened with…?”

What about you? Are you with me in having your series tied up neatly, or do you enjoy some loose strings when all is said and done?


 

Danielle Monsch is a Romantic Geek Girl Writing in a Fantasy World. Besides torturing her poor, poor editor about her latest story, Dani likes to read manga and watch anime, debate the merits of DC vs. Marvel, and geek out over the latest and greatest romance novel offerings. Catch up with Dani on Twitter @DaniMonsch

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19 comments
Pamela Webb-Elliott
1. Spaz
Great post!!! My disclaimer is I am not hard to please when it comes to books and if I don't like something I usually walk away from it and try to move on... But this book was a DOUBLE UGH for me. It wasn't even the lack of complete closure for me as it was having the heroine act so selfishly that the series ended with me thoroughly disliking her and not even caring if it was concluded. Eugenie was this amazing kickass heroine in the first 2 books, and this one she was just a self centered child. And her decision at the end had her making my LEAST FAVORITE heroine ever. This book was just not good and the heroine I have 0 respect for. I don't know what RM was thinking but this was such an F U to not only her own characters, but her fans as well. I'm having a hard time forgiving that when it comes to buying or reading future novelsby this author.
Chelsea Mueller
2. ChelseaMueller
I think the problem with Shadow Heir is that we finally saw Eugenie make character progression in the novel. She was making better decisions (no more Kiyo!) and dealing with trust issues with Dorian. Then the ending ripped all that away. She was no longer the Queen of Thorn and Rowan who had grown, but the same woman from Storm Born who didn't trust any gentry, even the one she loves. And that's unfair to the reader. It's unfair to Eugenie.

Up until the end, I really enjoyed Shadow Heir. (Far more than Iron Crowned, which I though was far too phoned in.) But breaking that bond with Eugenie at the end hurt readers.
Danielle Monsch
3. DanielleMonsch
I often wonder in these cases if the author has no more plans for anything else in the series but *just in case* they want to leave the book at a place that they can pick up story threads.

As a fellow writer, I get that. Some worlds are so big that you know even as the original story you thought of has ended, there is a chance they'll drag you back in and you'll want to create more stories within them. Because of that, you always want to leave yourself that opening.

But looking at it from the reader's perspective, it's just not fair for the writer to do that. That's why I fall on the side of when you end your series, you end it. Otherwise, I think you are mistreating your readers.
Lege Artis
4. Lege Artis
Oh, I think it's good that Dark Swan series ended, because it wasn't that good. It looks like RM didn't know what to do with her characters, heroine was unlikable and anoying. I hate unanswered questions in series and that is the only reason I read this book. It was awfull.And I still didn't get all the answers. I don't want to read anything from RM again.
Lege Artis
5. RebeLovesBooks
I hate cliffhangers. HATE THEM! But ending a series with a cliffhanger is a major deal-breaker for me. I won't even start a series if I know the author uses cliffhangers (Diana Gabaldon, anyone?). I don't want the author to tie up all the loose threads, but major plot lines have to answered, for pete's sake!
Lege Artis
6. ltwilliamson
AMEN! AMEN! AMEN! AMEN! AMEN!
Amanda Norris
7. sweettater
She messed up the ending to the VA series by focusing more on her spinoff person than the main characters and that has made me very wary of any ending book she writes. I love her succubus series but I've yet to read the final book in that series because of how she destroyed the VA series. Plus from the spoilers I've read on Succubus Revealed I already know it's a let down and I refuse to waste time or money on something I know will not be enjoyable.
Lege Artis
8. joanmarcia66
loved the series/didnt mind the ending until I read this was the last book!! what a let down. I am really dsappointed with this very weak and unsatisfactory ending--author did her readers a disservice on this one and as much as i'ave enjoyed her books, i will now hesitate to get into another series --color me pissed.
Chelsea Mueller
9. ChelseaMueller
@sweettater - The ending to SUCCUBUS REVEALED gave me closure. It was a good ending.

Then again, I didn't hate the VA ending the way you did. I didn't like the open-ended threads for Adrian, etc. but felt she treated Rose/Dimitri well.
Erma Jo Hewett
10. Ermajo
I really was waiting for the next book in the series. It was not just a leave to make your own ending up but I truly hope she adds one more book to the series and ties up the loose ends. I hate books that end this way. It is like a TV series that just stops before it gets to the end. I love Richelle's books but please finish one more of the series. I agree Succubus Revealed gave us a good finish and so did The Vampire Diaries. I certainly hope Bloodlines does the same. I do not mind a new take off on the "Old" characters. That works for me.
Lege Artis
11. MayaInRed


I'm in shock. I finished the book with the complete certainty that there would be another one, cause Richelle finishes her books. Different from other people, I enjoyed the Succubus and VA's ending. And Bloodlines was really good. I was skeptical at first, cause Rose wasn't the main, but the more I read it, the more I enjoyed this spin off.

BUT WTF? I'm sorry, but that was NOT an ending. Is one thing to finish a series when the main plot and the side plots are done and answered and THEN the characters move on with their lives. It's a whole other thing to just DON'T FINISH THE BOOK! It just can't be that she would do that, it makes no sense since her other series had a pretty complete beginning-middle-ending and it all seemed organized and thought out from the start. I'm thinking [or just hoping] that since in the book it says Eugenie will wait till the kids are teens to tell Dorian, maybe it'll be another spin-off, with their kids being the main characters? I just can't believe Richelle would make an ending like this, it's not her style. It doesn't make sense at all.
Lege Artis
12. Joely
I finished this book and threw it across the room!!! I was so mad, to make her a person that i did not like at the end of this book was sad, this book was amazing, til you get to the last chapter and then your like NO!!!! Are you serious?? NO!!! For her to do what she is doing to her childern and to Dorian!! WE needed closure with the final book and all she did was create more questions and made me dislike the main character!! I love her books but this one was one of the worst books i have ever read:/ I am a very disappointed fan..
Lege Artis
13. WTF??
Shame on you, Richelle Mead! Should have at least brought the twins home to Dorian. Loved the series, but with the way the last one ended, I actually thought there would be a fifth book. Extremely disappointed is an understatement.
Lege Artis
14. This Is Just Wrong!
I was doubly shocked as I was listening to this book on audio and had no warning of the abrupt end! I am so upset...the one thing Dorian would have loved the most and even after how amazing a man he had been, Richelle deprived us of reading about his joy upon finding out he had fathered not one, but two children! There is so much left unfinished. What about those two beautiful cribs he had made for the children, what about the Willow Queen's lack of punishment....what about Jasmine....how about an other-worldly grand wedding, etc., etc.? I waited through two books just hoping she would find out the children belonged to Dorian....then this is the ending I get?! I expected the prophecy to go away, the children to be raised in both worlds, something...ANYTHING!!! I am finding that I am always a bit disappointed with the Richelle Mead's book endings, with the exception of Succubus (the Vampire Academy was a bit disconcerting for me too) and I am thinking of banning her from "My Favorite Authors" list! I haven't been this upset since Gone With the Wind!...In my mind, this is what happens....Eugenie uses the Iron Crown to punish Maiwenn, giving the Willow Land to Jasmine to rule, she marries Dorian, they merge kingdoms, she brings the children to Dorian, while keeping in touch with the Reed family, Jasmine and Evan (the Reeds' nephew) fall in love and also have children, Eugenie gives her small home in Tucson to Tim (who finds out he is, in fact, Native American) and Lara who also marry, she builds a new one to accommodate herself, her two children and Dorian when they visit her world, everyone is happy....THE END!!!
Lege Artis
15. Bella F.
I just finished the book and I'm seriously mad! Even more than just mad but I'm going to try to keep my language clean. I completely agree and the worse part is I read the Vampire Academy series and she does the same thing. I hate to say it but I'm also hooked on the other series of hers. It is a shame when great authors try to satisfy everyone because it usually doesn't. If I wanted to come up with my own ending I would write my own book. Okay I'm done ranting but this was a great article and I hope current and future authors read it and take it in to consideration next time they're writing.
Lege Artis
17. Allisongm
I actually got here by googling "Dark Swan book 5". I have read (and reread) the four and love them. Unfortunately I did not realize that the fourth was the last. It sure didn't read that way. Now I am very disappointed in the ending, in what I kind of feel like is time wasted due to no real closure and most of all in the author. I do not intend to begin any of her other series if this is the payoff I get for being a fan and patron of her work. Thanks for the enlightening article. I agree with you wholeheartedly.
Lege Artis
18. F-ING DISAPOINTING!!
Same thing happened to me! I was googling book 5 and found this! I mean ETC RM!?! I loved the VA series and the new bloodlines books but I swear if you don't give me closure I will boycott ALL of you future books!!
Lege Artis
19. stormie
Omg, I just finished these 4 books in about a week on top of a 44 hour work schedule, Im sick over this "Cliffhanger" I know there are other authors out there that wouldnt dream about doung this!!! I think I will stick with them. I was going to start another series but after that I dont think I can, what a let down!!!
Lege Artis
20. Joy Skully
This was not an ending. If this was an ending there would be a conlcusion and there was none. How do you take a character then change it to have everyone hate her? The ending made zero sense to the whole story line. The author hints that in the far future she will write another one to wrap it up correctly. Maybe this is her acknowlidging her screw up? If I had read this series first, versus the succubus one, I would never have further read any of the others books. She really messed this one up.
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